The Official Writing Challenge
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Great idea to turn this subject into a poem about Peter's rash behavior and how we each have a bit of him in us. Thank you.
When I saw the topic "rash," I, too, thought of Peter. I appreciated the link between Peter and yourself, a link many of us can make. It's a good thing God is so patient with us, especially when we act too hastily. Nice poem.
This is quite lovely. I think you did a fine job of writing on topic while delivering a powerful message. Congratulations on ranking 6th in level three. Happy Dance!