The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/18
Laughing out loud. I identify! And well written besides!
04/14/18
Engaging and well written!
04/15/18
Well written I was right there in the kitchen with this mum. Very real.
04/16/18
Oh this is so good!
I really enjoyed this, especially the last line.

Will share this with my sister...

Blessings~
04/17/18
This really captures the idea of annoyance, with all its sights, smells and sounds. You did a great job.
I truly enjoyed this. You have a great subtle sense of humor. I found myself grinning often because I could relate to the MC. You also did a nice job of painting a picture for the reader. Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 17 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
04/26/18
Nice!