The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! I'm impressed and inspired to look for pertinent stories to be told from the history of my spiritual family. This story is a keeper.
Awesome! I hope you’re writing a book. Kept my interest and eager for more.
You did an excellent job with the topic, and an equally impressive job with the account of the "Biblical" family.

Well done...

Very creative take on the topic. I like the way you delve into the sorts of thoughts and feelings surrounding the Biblical event.
I enjoyed this story. You did a great job if thinking outside of the box. I liked your POV and thought it original. I did notice your tense switched from past to present to past prefect at times. That's just a little thing though. You did a great job of writing on topic and delivering a great message. Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level and 18 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.