The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/18
Wow! I'm impressed and inspired to look for pertinent stories to be told from the history of my spiritual family. This story is a keeper.
04/12/18
Awesome! I hope you’re writing a book. Kept my interest and eager for more.
04/15/18
Nice!
04/16/18
You did an excellent job with the topic, and an equally impressive job with the account of the "Biblical" family.

Well done...

Blessings~
04/18/18
Very creative take on the topic. I like the way you delve into the sorts of thoughts and feelings surrounding the Biblical event.
I enjoyed this story. You did a great job if thinking outside of the box. I liked your POV and thought it original. I did notice your tense switched from past to present to past prefect at times. That's just a little thing though. You did a great job of writing on topic and delivering a great message. Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level and 18 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.