The Official Writing Challenge
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I’m sure many can relate to this! Well done with topic.
Nice take on the topic, and one many mothers of daughters can relate too.
Good job!
Well done, nice job with the topic.

This is a great piece of writing, both in its concise readability and in its emotional honesty. It's difficult to come to the Lord like this. I admire your ability to share it with others.
I truly enjoyed this heart-felt prayer. I can totally relate. My mom used to call me and complain about Grandma. I'd laugh and say in twenty-five years, I'll be calling my daughter and complain about you! I also said I was sure my daughter would complain about me some day. My mom didn't live long enough for me to complain about her to my daughter. Sounds silly because I miss so much about Mom, but I also miss something I never had--me calling my now adult daughter and complain to her. Seems silly, but like you pointed out so well God gets it because Jesus was human and able to feel human emotions.
You did a great job. Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 14 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
Excellent writing. A whole lot of emotions succinctly written. Beautiful wording to describe your ugly emotions, and great development of the groaning theme, bringing it back to Jesus groaning. Impressive writing on a difficult subject.