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03/16/18
What a good example of greed. Well done.
03/16/18
Excellent! Well done...

Blessings~
03/18/18
Powerful story.
03/21/18
Powerful and well written! Had to share your story with my husband as we were just talking about a couple we know. One is very ill and tired of fighting. The other refuses to let go. I can't imagine how difficult that decision was for you both. Specially when greed played a major roll. Screams and tears of anger can cleanse the heart. What better place than at a river! God bless!
This is a powerful story. You do an outstanding job of developing the characters and having a few great conflicts to pull the reader along. Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!