The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/18
Good story. I like how you named the mean couple "Snarkey."
02/22/18
Strong story...thanks for sharing!
Great story--great message.

God Bless!
02/26/18
Very good story and I liked the outcome. I do think the ending was a little abrupt and could have expressed a more emotion on the part of the child. The rest of the story flowed very well. God bless!
Good story with a great ending.
Keep writing.