The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/18
Very well written from start to finish. So glad she had someone come into her life that was worth living for. Blesssings!
01/28/18
Great job with all the emotions in this entry. It was heartwarming and heartbreaking all throughout.
01/28/18
Poignant and heart-wrenching story. My heart is aching for the MC...but bitter sweet...and she's home with the LORD.

Blessings~
01/28/18
I liked the ending showing the second chance at life she received. You also showed the topic well...five children would definitely be very stressful!
01/28/18
I meant "home with the LORD" in terms of knowing where she is going eventually. Beautifully written story!

Blessings~
A well written amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing.

God Bless.
02/03/18
Congratulations on your 9th place finish, LeslieJean.

Since some of the story is based on true life, I am sure this young mother struggled greatly with all of the responsibilities. I am glad the Lord protected her in her time of crisis.
02/05/18
Beautiful story. Surprised by the ending. Glad that the MC was able to find enough strength to stay the course of life to find one that would love and care for her.