The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/18
This was beautifully written and read almost like a psalm.
There was only one place that took me briefly out of the flow and mood. Knowing that there was one character involved, I was thrown by the phrasing "princes and princesses". One of those would have been enough to communicate the generic idea you were going for and would have maintained the consistency.
01/28/18
Great job with this...wonderful message.

Blessings~
Beautifully written. I agree the prince and princess line was slightly jarring.

Thank you & God Bless.