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What a delightful story. You made your MC come alive and it was easy to empathize with her circumstances.
This touched my heart so deeply. Having worked my entire career in Nursing homes I witnessed what your MC went through so many times. Sadly, no matter how "lovely" the place's never "home" to them.

You made the MC jump to realistic heights and closed with a positive albeit poignant ending. She was finally "home"

Excellent writing, phenomenal job! I hope this gets the attention of the judges.

Having worked in Assisted living Environments for several years, I could really relate to your MC - Great job!
A lovely strong message with an excellent portrait of the MC. Also a confirmation that we need to consider our loved-one's passions and hopes.