The Official Writing Challenge
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A unique look at God's creatures. Well done.
11/30/17
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish in the Advanced category, Mike.

I like your creative take on the topic.
This is really creative. I'm not usually a big title person, but this one grabbed my attention. I think you could have jumped right into the story without the preamble, but that could just be my personal preference. I know this wasn't necessarily meant to be a children's story, but with some tweaking it could make a great picture book (which from me is a huge compliment because picture books are my favorite genre and in my opinion one of the toughest to write.) Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 15 overall. Happy Dance!