The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/17
Excellent!
Blessings~
11/10/17
I liked how you personalized the enemy, so I could identify them for who they are.
11/12/17
I enjoyed the creative take on this topic and the lessons throughout.
I think it would be helpful to brush up on punctuation, particularly the use of commas, as there were a couple of places where the absence of them affected the flow and understanding. There are some great lessons in the forums.
On another note, the idea of relationship here was portrayed as always good. Can there be harmful relationships that serve the evil rather than the good...
11/13/17
Great example of what is going on "behind the scenes."
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 20 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
11/17/17
Excellent when we know the enemy's strategy we will always win&disappoint his evil.plan.