The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/17
Well done
Blessings~
11/10/17
Johnathan and David paint a clear picture of true friendship.
11/12/17
Good job tracing the development of this friendship. The nature and circumstances around it has always intrigued me.

A couple of notes: "shaping history" at the beginning should be"shaped history"
When you were talking about Israel and their enemies the philistines, I first read "they were undefeated" as in Israel was undefeated, since Israel had been the subject of the previous sentences.