The Official Writing Challenge
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Well done,
You had an interesting introduction that pulled me in. I would have liked to see some kind of tie in to it at the end. I liked your approach of using scripture to define what a friend does. It would be interesting to continue that ( outside of this story) and do a more complete biblical word study on the concept of a friend.
Your love for Jesus shines through your article and gladdened my heart as I sensed it coming through your words. Yes, Jesus epitomises all that a true friend is and, as you indicated in your writing, like any offer of friendship, we can take it or leave it -- but what a blessing when we take it.
True Jesus is the only true friend.great writing