The Official Writing Challenge
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10/29/17
The structure of your poem seemed to communicate the feel of your poem very well. I liked how you tied community into God's presence. I was a little confused with the last line.
This is a powerful piece. I could feel the raw emotion and the love of God in your words. Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.