The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! That is quite the story, and very well written.

My only recommendation would be to put spaces between each paragraph ( in addition to the spaces you used between sections) to make it a little easier to read.
Congratulations on your 5th place finish in the Advanced category, Linda.

I am so glad God healed you of this terrible disease. The warm water must have been soothing, but what an ordeal to take a bath.
Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level and 20 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.