The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your examples of people who got cold feet in the Bible.

Since these are familiar Bible characters in the Bible, I probably would have told the story from a different perspective.

Keep Writing.
It is interesting to think of all those throughout scripture who experienced doubts and hesitation. Good job presenting that.

For this piece, with your tie in to present day relevance, i think a present day example would have been helpful.
This is a great mini Bible study. Congratulations on ranking 9th in your level. Happy Dance!