The Official Writing Challenge
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I smiled all the way through this. The only red ink I would suggest is the last line. It seemed to fall a little flat after all the fun. Also, I wanted to hear how Zoe reacted after overcoming her fear. The overall idea was fabulous and you executed it brilliantly.
I really enjoyed your story! You got the voice just right for Zoe.
Well done!
10/24/17
I SMILED THROUGH OUT AND ENJOYED YOUR STORY.
10/26/17
This is delightful insight into the mind of creative child. And indeed the show does go on , even if we get our part a bit skewed.
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 18 overall! Happy Dance.
11/02/17
Congratulations! You do have the knack of getting the true feeling into your story.