The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/17
I like the way you went into the idea of the disciples getting cold feet. I think that would have been evident without using the actual words, cold feet, especially since it is doubtful that the expression would have been around in that time period. It was an interesting read with some interesting ideas.
10/24/17
Yes, as I was told another time we don't need to use the phrase or word as long as you message portrays the meaning. Well written, I enjoyed the event from that perspective.