The Official Writing Challenge
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I haven't heard the term fair to middling in years. It made me chuckle. Good writing. God bless.
The open drew me in. The vivid descriptions of this piece stirred my emotions.

I probably would have intermingled the Bible verses throughout your story to give it more impact

Congratulations on your first place finish in the Advanced Division.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 18 overall. Happy Dance!