The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/17
I love this entry. It reminds me of how I scanned Facebook for updates on how friends and family were doing during the recent storms. I love the Biblical applications you used. I would suggest placing a space between paragraphs. It makes for easier reading. God bless.
10/13/17
Great job with a narrative story to draw the reader in and a great spiritual application.
This is a beautiful narrative of waiting for the storms in life to pass through.

I hope it does well this week.

I may have double spaced between paragraphs.

Well done
You nicely compared a real storm to a personal storm a person might go through.

There may be a sentence or two that have a word or words missing. Read this again slowly to see if you find a place that needs a word.

If you read it this way; you may find a sentence that may sound incomplete.
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