The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/17
Great job tying Bible verses with a suspenseful, narrative story.
This is maybe more a matter of my own understanding and the age we live in, but when I read, "virtual fishing frenzy" I thought of all the "virtual reality" stuff and wondered if the mc was playing a video game. Fortunately, the rest of the story straightened that out for me. :)
As in the days of Noah, many were lost but only a few were saved. Have we entered through the narrow gate or are we walking on the broad way.

Work out your own salvation with fear and trembling -- before it is too late.

A good warning to all.