The Official Writing Challenge
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10/13/17
This was a very beautiful story. I love the lessons with the windchimes.
A nicely made-up story with the intent to teach other wayward walking youth both of the perils and of the joys of the choices to be made.

Keep writing.
10/16/17
Aaron was fortunate, when he decided to go astray, to find a timely reminder of his danger and return where he belonged. And what a lovely metaphor of wind chimes for the calling of the Holy Spirit.