The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a very beautiful story. I love the lessons with the windchimes.
A nicely made-up story with the intent to teach other wayward walking youth both of the perils and of the joys of the choices to be made.

Keep writing.
Aaron was fortunate, when he decided to go astray, to find a timely reminder of his danger and return where he belonged. And what a lovely metaphor of wind chimes for the calling of the Holy Spirit.