The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 347 times
Member Comments
I liked the flow and message in this poem.

The tongue can be a dangerous weapon to hurt and destroy others.

I noticed that a few of the commas were in the front and looked out of place.

Great job
Well done!
Congratulations on winning 1st place in the Advanced category and 10th place overall, Caleb.

Beautifully written, Caleb. Free verse is difficult to write, but you have done a superb job.

It's great to see you in Editor's Choice. You deserve it.