The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked the flow and message in this poem.

The tongue can be a dangerous weapon to hurt and destroy others.

I noticed that a few of the commas were in the front and looked out of place.

Great job
09/15/17
Well done!
Blessings~
09/21/17
Congratulations on winning 1st place in the Advanced category and 10th place overall, Caleb.

Beautifully written, Caleb. Free verse is difficult to write, but you have done a superb job.

It's great to see you in Editor's Choice. You deserve it.