The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/17
Well done! Strong storyline, and written in such an interesting way...excellent.
Blessings~
I liked the flow of your story.

This entry had a strong plot and storyline.

I am not sure if "trodden" a bag of chips into the carpet was used correctly. I believe you meant "whirl" instead of whir.

Great job