The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/17
I really enjoyed the poetry and flow of this piece.

I would have liked a more chronological order, maybe even culminating in the Christians after Paul who have up everything to follow God?
This poem had a nice flow. I felt I got to know each bible character.

I was not sure if Jesus would be considered a diamond in the rough.

This a very creative piece.
09/08/17
Clever and creative use of the topic.
Blessings~