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08/24/17
This poem reminds me how short life is and how important it is to say, "I love you."
Thank you for your sobering reminder of how short our life can be and we don't what tomorrow holds.

I am not sure if these are words lostness and small stuffs.

Always remember to say, I love you when you have the chance.

I meant to say, We don't know what our tomorrows hold.
08/25/17
Powerful and penetrating.
Amen,
Blessings~
Yes, live and living is a progression of trials given to build us up and not tear us down. We conquer as we face each trial in its turn being built up as we go our way.

This is a good way to express yourself.