The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/17
Beautiful message!
Blessings~
08/26/17
Well done with a good message there. Just couldn't get the meaning of the last line third verse,but keep up the good work. Blessings.
08/26/17
there is nothing left of me all my sins are shown. is what I meant
This poem had a wonderful message
Yes, God does a miracle in our lives by our belief, repentance, baptism and faithful living.

Yes, your poem shows where a transformation is needed.

Keep up the good work with your meters and rhymes.