The Official Writing Challenge
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08/17/17
So sad, but I am glad the MC was able to make some good come out of a tragic situation. The truth is our ways are not God's ways.
What a horrific, unexpected ending! The pain and guilt of people who experience this must be crushing. I didn't understand why she saw the empty baby seat when she pulled into the car park in the beginning though? Were there two baby seats in the rear of the car? People who find a way to bring meaning to such a tragedy can only be admired.
08/24/17
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish in the Advanced category.

It is so important to protect children, the elderly, and pets from getting overheated in a car. Cracking the windows is not good enough.