The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a suspenseful tale. I could feel the anxiety of the MC.

I believe some of the transitions in the story could have been smoother.

I believe you meant to put and instead of nd in the following sentence: pushed the door closed nd lay there in the straw exhausted.

I liked that it had a happy ending.


Congratulations on your highly commendable award in the advanced division.