The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for the powerful reminder God's presence in our lives.

I liked the flow of the poem.

I don't believe the punctuation was placed properly

Nicely written





The presence of God for His people in the pillar of fire and cloud always stands out to me of His mercy and grace.

The punctuation issues were a little distracting.

I was reminded in the part about Eden moving to a wasteland how the Lord promises in Isaiah to transform the wilderness back into a garden like Eden.