The Official Writing Challenge
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I learned many interesting facts about Nimrod.

I believe the opening sentence could have been stronger.

Thank you for writing
A good way to bring a Bible story to life. Using 'easy peasy' took me out of the story though. I know you say that it was their slang, but would this rough and tumble crew use such slang? Maybe something more harsh? This piece encouraged me to think about the motivations of the people who actually lived the events.
Most interesting!