The Official Writing Challenge
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We need people like Peter with a heart to help the less fortunate. Thank you for sharing this story. God bless.
Lovely story with a prophetic component.
Great job creating an interesting story and tying the ending to the dream at the beginning.

Red Ink: there were places that could have used more commas. This would have made it a bit easier to read.