The Official Writing Challenge
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i am so surprised there weren't more entries on this story. It is a lovely story of a loving and faithful father. Your descriptions and vernacular brought me right into the setting.
This was beautiful with great descriptions. Congrats on your win.
Wow wow wow! What an awesome story! The character voices were perfect, and you... you've just blown me away. I am astounded; this is such a good piece! One of my favorites ever! Keep it up!
My keyboard is wet with tears as I type - so beautiful! So moving! So awesome! By the time I brought my Bible back parents were gone; so your piece struck home with a powerful blow! Thank you so much for writing, and Congratulations for your well deserved place in Editors Choice. Kudos from back home in Alabama!
Just had time to read the entries from last week, well done.
Good job man!

I mean't to leave a comment when I read it during challenges... Keep it up because I look forward to reading more of your work!

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