The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for this heartwarming story.I hope Ramon's life improves.
07/31/17
You worked the topic in a prolific way!

Most of the judgements people bestow over others apparent behavior are cruel and unfair.

Thanks for the writing. Blessings:)
08/02/17
Good job with the mc's thoughts and with the gradual revealing of Ramon's story.