The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/17
Great job!
Blessings~
07/23/17
Amusing and imaginative. Well done. Just be careful with a quick read before submitting to eliminate the tiny blunders. Blessings galore.
07/25/17
This was an interesting and creative take on the topic and on the standard merperson stories. Good job delving into the fantasy genre for the challenge.
Not everyone could write a story like this. You have to be thinking in two worlds at the same time.

Good work.