The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/17
Well done!
Blessings~
07/20/17
Thanks. Unfortunately when I read the entry on the website I noticed that my hurried editing in my lunch break has removed an important sentence. As Sam is making the tea, Angus asks Sam, "are you thinking of leaving already?" Then Sam explains about the lack of money.
07/23/17
I enjoyed the characters and the dialogue and felt like I could see the scene playing out.
07/23/17
A good take on perseverance and endurance leading to satisfaction. Well done. Blessings.
A very well written picture story that tells the rest.
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