The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/17
Great job creating a thoughtful contrast of two groups of people and the prayer to be a light to the more excellent one.

Thought: What happens when Christians get drawn into the ipads and computers?

Red Ink: This part: "that I belong..." could be reworded to "to which I belong"
07/14/17
Profound message here!
Well done,
Blessings~