The Official Writing Challenge
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I like how you tied the current news headlines with crowds to hypothetical headlines that could have described what was happening in Jesus' day.

Red Ink: There were several sentence fragments that could be rewritten to provide an easier flow to the entry.
I enjoyed your entry,
and you nailed the topic perfectly.
It was interesting to think about the crowd in front of Pilate. I'd never considered it that way before. And I especially enjoyed your version of 1st century headlines.