The Official Writing Challenge
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07/13/17
Great job with the story, dialogue, and movement of this entry.

I find myself wondering what was in the bag, but I guess that really doesn't matter.
07/14/17
Nicely done, good message, and I liked the way the story concluded!
Blessings~
07/15/17
Loved the take on the theme and the progression of your story with great dialogue.Well done. Blessings.
07/26/17
You really know how to set a scene and draw your readers in with the wisdom spoken by an older character, then illustrating the point in a powerful way. Great job.