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06/20/17
Very nice devotion and a great reminder of who is our peace. His presence is all we need.

Very nicely written!
07/01/17
Congrats placing third!

You have summed it up so nicely. Only in Jesus Christ we will have true rest.

Many Blessings!
07/04/17
Congratulations on a well-deserved devotional. I admit to being a mix - exploration and relaxation - both essential! Blessings.
This is a fitting devotion. I'm sure almost everyone can relate to this powerful message. I like how you start off with a true story that many of us can understand. With a tiny bit of tweaking, I think you should consider submitting this devotion somewhere. A great start, if you haven't done so already, would be FaithWriters Daily Devotions. One thing to remember if you do submit it anywhere though is often devotions are translated into many different languages and the play on words of resting in the sun/Son doesn't translate. Other than that though, I think many would really hear God speak through your writing in this sweet devotion.