The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this. I think it was quite brilliant. The dialog really helped develop the MC but wasn't too hard to understand. I think you had a great balance of slang and proper usage. I liked the literal translation of the topic and you showed a bit of the figurative side too. This jumps to the top of my favorites list.
I really enjoyed reading this story. Your MC came alive.
Congratulations on your 3rd place win, Rebecca.

Creative and well developed characters.
Congratulations for placing 1st in the Advanced category.
A rollicking good Aussie yarn. Well done for your Advanced placing and your EC. Great work.
I love the dialogue. Congrats on your well deserved win!
Congratulations Rebecca on being the Level Champion for this quarter. I just read your story and loved it! It's told so well, with never a dull moment. As a fellow-Aussie, I particularly appreciated it and the Aussie lingo. Great writing!

Congratulations on the quarterly award.

The dialogue was well developed.

The end touched my heart.