The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/17
A nicely written story about holding to your convictions even when it comes to putting God first over a loved one. I thought it had a good hook but then it seemed that the topic of childhood got lost in the story of holding to a righteous life over the affection of someone you wished would change. Hope this helps. God bless.