The Official Writing Challenge
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03/17/17
I always love a story with an element of surprise. I'm not sure if the story adequately represents the topic, but it was creative and well-written.
03/17/17
P.S. :-) It is not always necessary to identify whose speaking. i.e. " said the Specialist."










03/19/17
It's a well written story and I kind of got caught up in the drama. But I didn't understand whether this is a naughty child or an adult suffering from Alzeheimer.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 11th overall. Happy Dance
03/26/17
Congratulations on your 1st place ranking and 11th overall. You grabbed my attention right away and pulled me into the ongoing drama. Also, great job building the intrigue and sympathy only to also hit me with a surprise ending. Well done!
04/09/17
Congratulations Phillip. Heart-tugging story