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Creative, poetic take on a struggle we all face.
Great twist on a subject everyone needs. If you really think about it, that is how unrelenting temptation is. You put it in perspective. Good. Job. I had to skip over some of those Knock, Knocks. I was getting dizzy. Ha! God bless.
One type of poetry we don't always see.

At the beginning, I took it the other way. I took it that Jesus being the door was knocking wanting us to open it to him. After we have obeyed Jesus' calling we need the Holy Spirit - given at baptism (Acts 2:38) to help us resist of the temptations of the evil one.

I enjoyed the read even if I thought of it differently.
Interesting approach to the topic. Well done.

Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 13 overall. Happy Dance!