The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful story!
Great job with the dialogue and with building the plot. Sad situation. :(
"Burble" and "Tittered", I'm adding them to my vocab list. Never used them. Cool! Great story. Kept me interested. Had a hard time seeing the topic. Saw several grammar/punctuation errors. I particularly have a problem with this area, so now I reread my story every day from Thursday morning until I submit on Wednesday. Unbelievable how many times I had overlooked something. I have been instructed by some that are masters at this craft that they wait even up till the last few minutes before submitting. I can't because my tech skills are really poor, and if there is a glitch somewhere, I want some time to fix it. Hope this helps.