The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/17
Lovely
03/01/17
I loved it. You realize though that every wife that reads that will have her bags packed and saying, "See I told you we need to do something like that." My wife and I are heading to the other side of the island for a few days this week, not to rekindle, but to keep the flame going. Hope lots of readers can ward off going back to basics and go to the place you painted to enhance their marriage. Good job. I noticed some grammar slips. Reread you work.
03/01/17
Wonderful! My only comment would be you didn't need to use the phrase back to basics - your story concept & execution fit the topic perfectly without it.
A great reminder for all married folks. I always enjoy a nice love story and happy ending!