The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a compelling story. I enjoyed the conflict and you pulled me in right away. Be careful about your POV shifts. You were in a few different heads and it made it a little hard to follow at times. I liked your take on the topic. The ending was really sweet and left me with a warm feeling inside.
02/10/17
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