The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a great sense of humor. The dialog definitely told a story. I wish I knew a bit more like who was talking and maybe had some narration in to break up the dialog. You definitely nailed the topic. I could see this being between a husband and wife easily. The gentle banter appealed to me. Nice job.
02/10/17
Congrats on your wonderful piece!
Blessings~
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 17 overall. Happy Dance!
02/16/17
Congrats on placing 2nd.

Enjoyed reading this, made me chuckle.
Many Blessings!