The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute story and I appreciate your ability to laugh at yourself. You had me smiling several times. In my opinion, the beginning is a bit sluggish and perhaps not even needed. It picked up when you started talking about marrying your husband. I think we cam all relate to this type of situation. It reminded me of my daughter who lived in Kosovo with a host family. Oh they had chuckles at her expense. For three weeks, every night instead of telling her family she was tired she said, "Good night, I am a toy." She really kept them entertained, and your story kept me entertained.
02/07/17
An endearing story. Thanks for sharing with everyone!
02/10/17
Congrats!
Blessings~
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 18 overall. Happy Dance!