The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent poem with a great message!
Superb! As I have previously stated in other pieces, I am not qualified to critique poetry. But, I would vote this a winner. It doesn't take me long to decide if I like a piece or not. I liked yours a lot. It was filled with great words of wisdom and scriptural messages without a bunch of "just rhyming". I look forward to future works of yours and may ask you for some help in writing some poetry. I have written some silly ones just for fun. Thanks for a great piece.
I love this. Poetry is not my favorite genre, but this piece is my favorite so far this week. I love your honesty. I can't imagine a reader not being able to relate to this. I also enjoyed your delightful sense of humor. You have a strong message in these verses.
Congratulations on your 1st place Advance ranking! Others have already reviewed your piece perfectly, and said it way better than I could. Well done.
Congratulations! God bless.
I felt sure your poem was the winner right away, Lisa. Congratulations on the great writing and addressing the topic so well. Great job.
Congrats on your powerful piece! Well done and well deserved.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 11th overall. This truly was one of my all time favorites so I am doing a happy Dance for you!
Fabulous bit of word-smithing my dear. Congratulations on your level win.